The Battle Scars

“You can go back, I don’t want to talk neither with you nor with anyone else. Basically I don’t need any consoling speech atleast here. But I get to know something, why concerated acid sold cheaper than 8ml eyeliner”,  she said with teary voice. 

” I know.. I know you don’t want to talk. And I am not here to deliever any speech as I know what doesn’t break you, makes you more stronger. I still don’t know why is it sold cheaper, but I know its cheap for only some devils and it cost much much more to others. Take off your scalf right now,  you don’t need to hide your face from anyone, let that devil hide his face. These are just not only the scars, but are the battle scars. Life is just like a boxing match. Defeat is declared not when you fall but when you refuse to stand again. Never let your words, your ambitious, your strength to fall short. Never let your eyes on the world, be enough capable that the whole world have their eyes on you. Now turn back and talk to me”, he completed. 

“Agreed. But I don’t have strength to face that awkward look. And it might scare you”, she replied. 

” My eyes still have that admiration for you. No, you can never scare me in anyway. This incident might have taken that beauty of your face but it will never take away the beauty of our love”, he smiled. 

  • P. S. – A fiction, hope you have enjoyed. You are welcome to share your words, ideas and thoughts in the comment section. 


Purva

48 responses to “The Battle Scars”

  1. emotionsoflife2016 Avatar
    emotionsoflife2016

    Powerful words

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    1. Thanks a lot for reading as well as sharing your kind words here!

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  2. Acidic words too often leave a scarred face on the person it was heaped on. Yes pull back the scarf indeed for these battle wounds should not make you fall and be unable to stand back up!

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    1. Indeed! Thanks for sharing your kind words here! 🌹

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  3. quotesandmore (Chitra) Avatar
    quotesandmore (Chitra)

    wow, a beautiful post… really touching story…

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    1. Thanks a million for the appreciation as well as admiration..!!!

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      1. quotesandmore (Chitra) Avatar
        quotesandmore (Chitra)

        its my pleasure 🙂 Happy new year 🙂

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      2. Happy new year to you too. Wish you a wonderful year ahead..!! 🌹

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      3. quotesandmore (Chitra) Avatar
        quotesandmore (Chitra)

        Thanks 🙂

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  4. Omg…..do you see what I mean…powerful and real…I felt touched, upset and so much love for you just reading this just the thought of this happening to someone….you are a beautiful writer sweetheart I hope to goodness you never stop!!

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    1. You are incredible, you always appreciate with such great words that I have nothing to say more, you make me short of words. Thanks so much for the admiration.
      Much love 💓💋💓💋💓

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      1. oh my goodness you are just the sweetest thing! and you are also most welcome my sweet friend! ❤

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      2. And you are the cutest! 🌹🌹

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      3. XOXO!!

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  5. A powerful post indeed.

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    1. Thanks a ton for appreciation and admiration.

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  6. i feel most fiction has some threads of fact in them.

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    1. Indeed, you are right. BTW thanks for reading as well as sharing your words.

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  7. Wow, you do have all these worlds inside you. Commendable indeed to the utmost. Thanks.

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    1. Thanks a million for such great and kind words. I am highly obliged.

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    1. Thanks a lot for always being so kind!

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      1. It is always a pleasure for us.However I would like to apologize my humble expression in the English language. Here I still have some catching up. 😉
        May I ask you something? Is it really so bad with the air pollution in New Delhi, as reported in our media (example: https://www.tagesschau.de/ausland/indien-smog-101.html).
        Most of germans years before have known India only by a film from the year 1959 😉 Look, here is a small piece of it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UkrZikzlXXA Isnt it funny? 😉 😉

        Greetings

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      2. Pollution has reached to its heights in Nov but now its much much better, smog is in control now.
        It is funny and I am not getting it what actually they both were doing, lol 😂😂😂

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  8. Intense..keep writing..

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    1. Thanks a bunch for reading as well as for the appreciation!

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  9. Deep, moving and beautiful on every level x

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    1. Thanks a lot for your beautiful words! Much love 💓💋💓

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      1. Much love to you, xxx

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  10. This is beautiful – and in that beauty there is great strength

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    1. Thanks a million for sharing your wonderful words!

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  11. Beautiful penned words Sudershana and an intense piece of work. Scars that can never be mended but one has to be firm and let go and move forward. Great.

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    1. Indeed! Thanks a ton for the wonderful words! 🌹

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  12. Heyyyyy! ❤
    I would like to tell you that I tagged you! Here is the post 😀
    https://doniwblogger.wordpress.com/2017/01/05/20162017-tag-qa/

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  13. This is really nice purva..just love your body even with those scars

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    1. Indeed! Thanks a lot for your kind words!

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  14. Girl! You are a AWESOME Blogger! 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
    That’s All I can say!

    Hugz and Kisses,
    Miss B.❤💋🌹💕

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    1. Oh my god! You are so kind and very humble to say such great words. Endless thanks to you. And bless to have such great blogging friends.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍

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      1. 😀😀😀You’re welcome dear!😙😙😙
        🌹❤🌹❤🌹❤
        😄😄😄😄😄😄

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  15. Powerful post. Loved your thoughts. Read this blog on acid victims http://drmohammadjawad.blogspot.com/2017/02/the-story-behind-saving-face.html and leave your comments

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    1. Thank you so very much

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  16. Such a tragic subject to address, but so important to shed light on it. You did it in a very sensitive way.

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