Unsaid Words…

“Undoubtedly, these two years of Business School have filled my life with the most vibrant colors. I always wanted to be here to chase my dreams but I don’t know when this carreer oriented dreamer started dreaming of you. It’s the farewell probably the last day that I got to see you, from tomorrow I will be miles away from you, in another nation. Today I might have achieved the dream job of my life but sadly its my life that’s not with me; that’s you. May be because I have never asked my life to hold my hands in the crowd, to listen my words when I shout, to embrace me when I make proud, may be because… so many words I always wanted to say but never found those ways. I adore every second, every minute and every hour that I spent in being even with your idea. In the way to find a partner in you, I don’t want to lose that friend too so I have never said. I always loved your smile but wanted to be that reason, I always loved your eyes but wanted them to capture me in every season,  simply I always loved you that too without any reason”, he wrote while leaving for the airport and handed over her.

 I wish you might be here while I read this, but you are not. I wish I might have said but that mutual feeling to lose never let the two of us to say. I couldn’t have explained you how it feels to look up across and see you standing at my side. It’s like I want you to look at me every time but I turn my head whenever you do. I promise I will keep this piece of my heart that makes me smile whenever I think about you. “, she wrote on the other side of the same paper. 

  • P.S. – A fiction, hope you have enjoyed. You are welcome to share your words, ideas and thoughts in the comment section. 

Its not because there was no love,its because there were no words that never let their story happen. 

-Purva


79 responses to “Unsaid Words…”

  1. I always loved your eyes but wanted them to capture me in every season. love is special.

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    1. It’s very very special. Thanks much for sharing your words💙

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  2. A well written “fiction”!! 🙂 😀

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    1. Haha, thank you so much for admiring as well as appreciating. 💙

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  3. Der Krieger des Lichts ن Avatar
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    You are a great lover

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    1. Haha, not yet. I guess😂

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    1. I am glad you find it. Thank you so much

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      1. keep writing. 🙂

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      2. Sure! Have a great week ahead

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  4. I don’t know how to express in words, how I actually felt.. But it touched me…❤

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    1. Words are less to tell how amazing it felt when your words ACTUALLY touch someone lives. Thank you so much for adoring it❤❤

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      1. It’s always my pleasure dear! 😊😊❤❤

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      2. I have heard from you after a long time… How are you? 😊

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      3. I am pretty good. Just because its exam next month. What about you?

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      4. I’m fantastic as always!! All the best for your exams.. 😊

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      5. Well! Thank you very much for that😍

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      6. You’re most welcome!! 😊😊

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  5. Well, few things are better left unsaid! Great work of romantic fiction! 🙂 ❣️

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    1. Indeed. Thank you so much for adoring it. I am glad you liked it.💙

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  6. Oh Purva! How you get me every time! I almost wanted to rush to the end just to read if it was fiction or not but I held out and just embraced the sweet romance and longing of it all! You are now as always just such a gifted writer my love!! ❤

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    1. Sometimes I wonder how easily anybody can put a smile on anyone face just by few words. Thank YOU so much for making this start of my day more beautiful. I owe you for such kind words. Much love to you❤

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      1. I give the words you absolutely have earned lovely!! Im so glad they have added to the start of your day in such a positive way! XO!! ❤

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      2. Thanks much for kindness and love 😍

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    1. I am glad you find it. Thank YOU

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  7. Wow, lovely post, you have weaven the words with grace and smoothness. Loved your post.

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    1. Thank you so much for such great admiration as well as appreciation 💙

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      1. You are most welcome 😊😊

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  8. wonderful,and touching.

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    1. Thank you so much for your great words. I am glad you liked it💙

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  9. lovely! miss you at my blog! take good care. xo

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    1. I am just trying to compensate every wonderful piece that I have dare to miss. So just off to your site. And THANKS TO YOU for making your presence here.💙

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  10. Its not because there was no love,its because there were no words that never let their story happen. I loved these words that said every little bit of your beautiful and awesome words. So true and that is what Love is and you are left standing there. Great, Sudershana. Loved it.

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    1. Aww thank you so so much for sharing your marvelous words. Even I love your every word whether they are at my site or at your site. Thank you for making your presence felt ALWAYS❤

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      1. Welcome dear Sudershana and I loved your words of so much Love. Great post and thank you dear, have a great day.

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  11. Oh yes, Purva; you have the ability to lighten any frown!
    This is true: No frown has any strength around you! ❤

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    1. No BETTER words can make more happier than this. Thank YOU so much for these marvelous words. Much love to you❤❤

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  12. so many words I always wanted to say but never found those ways.
    Wowwwww….
    Feels so good to read such a beautiful lovely post after so long! I have followed you again so that my reader now shows up your regular posts.

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    1. Haha, little cuteheart❤ you are much awaited reader here so welcome back. Oh! I am obliged that you have followed me that’s quite some honor, haha. 😂😂
      Feel great too to have your words here

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      1. Na na, I have already followed you. But I followed you now again. Just to be updated about your posts!

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      2. Aww that is even more kind of you. THANK YOU cuteheart❤

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      3. Don’t mention, Di!😊😊😊

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      4. Haha, cuteheart which stream have you taken? How are you?

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      5. I literally want to opt for pcmb!!! Is this a bad choice?

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      6. Not at all. I too was a non medical student. So ready to drive the ship of your dreams

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      7. But I am saying pcm(b) too…

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      8. Great. Go ahead. All the best❤

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      9. I am feeling so great that you weren’t in the group of the people discouraging me for this…

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      10. Aww cuteheart❤ just do what YOU want

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      11. 😊😊😊😊 Thanks a million!

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    1. Thank you so much for adoring it❤

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  13. The photo and the text go well together.
    You have been able, Purva, to find the words to express your morosity and your languor.
    Great post and good writer.
    love ❤
    Michel

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    1. Thank YOU for such kind and great words. I am truly highly obliged. I am glad you liked it.
      Purva💙

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  14. Very nice fiction. Liked it. 👍☺️

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  15. I enjoyed reading this. And thanks for following me.

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    1. Thanks much. I am glad you enjoyed.

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  16. For a while there i thought this was real. It felt so real. #Thepowerofimagination….Nice one. I love it. Keep writing your heart out.

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    1. Thank you a billion for your lovely and kind words. #power of imagination that is something made us powerful, isn’t it?
      Thanks for adoring it too.💙

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      1. Yes it is my dear. It’s my pleasure always.

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    1. Thank you so much for the reblog!!

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  17. It is a soft and delicate story. Thank you.

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    1. Thank YOU for reading it and sharing your wonderful words here!!

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  18. Very touching. You captures the drama of college ending and the rest of life starting, with new people.

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    1. I am glad it do touch some lives. Thank you so much for appreciating as well as admiring!!

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    1. Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.

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      1. Comment my photo!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤

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  19. Beautifully written…my favorite line is “I always loved your smile but wanted to be that reason”. You go deep with your words, well done. 🙂

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  20. Very beautifully penned. Touching. 💝

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  21. Lovely short fiction piece – with a poem inside it that could stand alone. Those bold type words are certainly a poem. Very lovely. peace always

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    1. Thank you so much for your beautiful words here. So glad you liked it. Much love to you😍

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