“They have spent their whole life in fulfilling our wishes but its hurting to fulfill their one. I loved you and will always but for this I can’t leave the ones who have told me what actually this selfless feeling is. I don’t want to be the best daughter but always wanted to be the good one. At some point, we tend to realize that some people can stay in our heart but not in our life. Somewhere the end was always known to us but we dare to write the start, the beginning. But for them, for you; I am going to smile like nothing is wrong, talk like everything is perfect and live it’s all a dream and will pretend like its not hurting. Though it hurts and every time more harder and harder. But it was the most beautiful feeling I ever encountered, the most beautiful musing I ever had, the best ride I rode and the best person I loved and will always,” she said in teary voice.
“We dare to start as I had a strength to write the climax but only with you. I am leaving you not because I don’t love you but because you had never asked me to stay. Promise me, may be in another life,in another year, in another night, in another hour we will meet again without fear, without tear but only with love, promise me. I will wait for you ever and forever,” he replied stepping back.
” Meet me where the sky touches the sea, Wait for me where the world begins. I promise, I will meet you,I will love you ever and forever”, she yelled.
- P.S.- A fiction, hope you have enjoyed. You are welcome to share your thoughts, ideas and words in the comment section.
-Purva
Seems realistic.. Until you mention so, I didn’t felt like that 😕 Touchy
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It’s a fiction but a real story for many. Hope you had enjoyed and I am glad you get connected and find it real:D
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Fiction has fact as a foundation. 🙂
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Absolutely! Thank you so much for sharing your words. Hope you have enjoyed it!
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Sentimental….!
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That has described the most beautiful sentiment. Thanks a lot for sharing your words!
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👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you..Thank you. After so long, how are you doing? I was missing to ruin your comment box with little cuteheart ❤
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I am fine. How are you?
Well, he’s having his exams. So, he’s busy studying. 😉
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Hmm I am very well. So glad to have you here
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Even I remember that!!! Long time no see… 😊😊
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This is authentic.Loved reading it Maam
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Aww thank you so so much for such great words. I am so glad you liked it 😀
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My pleasure Maam
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You are so kind and humble.😃
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You too and Thank you Maam♥:-)
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Wow Purva 👌👌👌👌
Loved the post you nailed it my friend.
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Thanks a million for such great words. I am delighted that you liked it 😀
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It was awesome!!
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It’s my absolute pleasure that you find it. Thank you once again 😃
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Such a sad sorry, but very believable. Sometimes True Love has to be found in another lifetime.
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Indeed. Thanks a lot for your valuable words
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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just noticed typo should be story, not sorry. Oops!
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I had understood it earlier; BTW thanks a lot for lighting it up
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Wow. You find heights of expression and you stay right there. So hard to do. Gut wrenching. Congratulations.
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Thanks a bunch for such amazing words. I am so glad that you liked it.
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Why not since you are a thoughtful writer
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Thank you so much for always being so kind. 😀
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My pleasure, welcome, don’t mention it.
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Love reading this😘👏👏😘
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Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it
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Your welcome!
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Many mixed emotions in this story Purva…sad, heartbroken and hope all in the name of love. Nice.
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Haha, all in the name of love. Sometimes some writings make you to feel the scene and it take us to the next emotional level, I find it even while writing it. Thanks a million for appreciation as well as admiration 😀
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My pleasure!
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A beautiful piece, Purva; so touching and so true for so many.
You have a wonderful ability to bring meaning to hearts perhaps tender and raw.
Deeply profound and poetically beautiful… ❤
xoxoxo
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Thank you so so much for such great appreciation as well as admiration and for always being so kind. Much much love to you < 3❤❤
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Beautifully written Purva… such intensity. I love the line: we will meet again without fear, without tear …… xx
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Thanks a million for the appreciation as well as admiration ❤❤
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You’re very welcome! x
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How sad, but sometimes that is life. Good one 🙂
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Absolutely. Thank you so much for sharing your great words
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Sad, no..rejoin them purva asap..
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Haha, sure in my next post ✌
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Thanks dear.. 😍
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Your writing always captures my heart dear Purva so full of beautiful sentiment and emotion. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Aww thank you so much for your lovely words. So, I have captured the most beautiful thing isn’t it?
BTW I am going to read all your posts that I have dare to miss ,haha. Soon and the love you shared right back to you < 3❤❤❤
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oh sweetheart don’t you worry about catching up with my posts the love is shared between us no matter what and I know that for sure😙
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thank you so much!
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Wonderful words. Thank you!
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Thank “you” to read and for sharing your admiration as well as appreciation.
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Love this! And is so true!
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Thank you so very much
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Powerful and emotional writing – very well done! I can relate to parts of this and especially the line of: ” At some point, we tend to realize that some people can stay in our heart but not in our life.” It’s not easy writing fiction piece based on dialogue alone but you have succeeded in bringing their heartache, their characters across brilliantly.😀
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Thank you so much for the appreciation as well as admiration. Hope you like the latest one too
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oh my!
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😃
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Sudarshana u made me cry reading this beautiful masterpiece. So beautifully written I loved it. Great 👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Oh! That’s not good. I am the reason for someone tears. Apologize. Thanks for appreciating and admiring like always
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But you wrote it so beautifully and sometimes these stories really touches a core in our heart. You are a great writer Sudershana.
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Thank you so so much. It’s your kindness and admiration that appreciates to write more. Hope you will like the latest post also.
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Yes definitely and it works so nicely when we all appreciate each others works and we too can write so much better out of our being and like to inspire people too. Yes for sure will visit your post immediately. A great happy day to you Sudershana. Hugs and Love to you dear.
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Thank “you” so much. Always glad to have you here.
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Same here dear.
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Of course I enjoyed it, how can one not enjoy reading as a masterpiece as this.
A lovely romantic story.
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Aww thanks love. You are such a sweetheart. Thank you
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It did touch the chords of grief and love fittingly. 🙂
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Thanks much for your kind words. I am glad you liked it and hope you will like the latest one too.
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Will go through it, Sudershana!☺️
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Reblogged this on The Writers Desk.
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Aaww Purva, this is a beautiful peace, you certainly have penned this wonderfully.
The pain is visible from their words and it’s sad that they have to part.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much for adoring it..!!!
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Beautifully written 👍🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
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Beautiful penned
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These words connect really well to reality. You’ve defined that true love lasts more than a lifetime. Appreciate the thought which you’ve let down to words.
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As one of your older readers, your story rings loudly. My favorite part: ” Wait for me where the world begins.” PERFECT!
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You weave emotions in your writing so beautifully that it just keeps the reader wanting more and more…
So you believe in soulmates, that’s great. Even I wrote a post about it, I hope you’ll like it. 😊
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Beautifully written, thank you so much dear friend for good sharing
Kisses
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very beautiful post sudershana.
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Fiction is never 100% fiction its either influenced or witnessed
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That’s emotional 💞
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thx I needed to know this
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