Finally He Found

He still carries that paper along each day, the only difference is that earlier it was her message she wrote everyday for him and now it was her last letter she had given before leaving him. He always thought that he deserve more than empty words and fake promises. Her silent exist broke him from inside. Love broke where trust is laid, and love dies where trust is betrayed, this was something he believed. 

My thousand words can’t bring you back, I know because I have tried. And neither would a million tears, I know because I have cried”- last message he wrote for her. 

In a sea of people, his eyes always search for her. He looked for her in every girl he saw. After years of searching he finally found the one. The one who had absolutely nothing in common with her. 

  • P. S. – A fiction, hope you have enjoyed. 


-Purva



73 responses to “Finally He Found”

  1. Oooooh so sad 😭 indeed..
    you will move beyond her one day

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    1. That was the fiction and I am a girl:

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      1. Hahahaha..
        awwwww!!!

        You are really good then..
        because I was convinced it was about you…

        Really touching peice

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      2. Haha, thank you very much! 🌹

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      3. Hahahaha!!!! Oh god…. 😂😂😂😂

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  2. Hello Di!
    May I say that this is the one of the best posts I’ve read from you?
    It’s so Amazing!!!!!!!!
    Her last letter and the first para just got me into it…

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    1. Aww thank you very very much little movielover 💕💎. I am glad you liked it. And for your wonderful words 💓💓

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      1. Thank you! Submission done

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      2. You asking me? Oh yes, I submitted. Now I am just waiting for them to publish it!
        You also check it out!
        It’s pretty awesome. http://www.fagnum.com and search for leaderboard and rest you will get to know…
        Any doubt, I’ll be there… 😊😊

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      3. Ohoh! I will be their, little gentleman 💕thank you!

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  3. Lovely and sad. Absolutely believable. Felt it closely by heart.

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    1. Thank you so much! I have tried, thanks for admiring it!

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      1. A great try indeed. Keep trying. 😉 Welcome.

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      2. Try try makes you perfect. 😂

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      3. Close to being perfect. 😉

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      4. Glad to hear that! Writing sad story makes you sad too, is’nt it?

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      5. I don’t write sad stories on purpose. When I am sad, words start forming automatically and I just write. It’s actually a way for me to express the pain but strangely, it doesn’t relieves me.

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      6. I had tried not for any purpose. But it made me sad!

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      7. Hmm… That’s because you weren’t sad. I channel my sadness into words but if I write sad story, I would have to think of a sad situation and that would definitely make me sad.

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      8. Absolutely! It makes!

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      9. Yup. I know that. 😉

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  4. I’m glad it had a happy ending.

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    1. I always try to do happy ending in all my stories, as sad may sound like depressive! And writings must make you smile.

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  5. This fiction is much closer to reality …It’s speaks volumes of feelings of love for one another…Very nice.:-)

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    1. Thank you very much for reading as well as sharing your kind words! 😍
      Thank you once again! 🌹

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      1. My pleasure….keep posting wonderful articles.& gn★★★

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      2. Thank you! And I will! Gn 😃

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  6. paradox is fun. it the first communication actually recieved we see the last of communication. have you made the fictional motif tradition of handing out cotton ear swabs with the dates? 😀 she writes a letter and some time later she mistakenly opens his – oh, it was kept but it was NEVER meant to be opened…and what a surprise it was pandora’s box of memories… aw well there is one more item on the shopping list, cotton ear swabs travel kits. perfect for any and all MORONS who would do so much better if they listened. if one has a droll penchant for the aged joys… “listen to the rhythm of the falling rain, telling me what a fool I’ve been i wish i would go away and let me cry in vain and let me be alone again…” (the cascades or johnny rivers, dan folgelberg…)

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    1. Thank you very much for sharing your kind words!

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  7. Touchy and too sad one. Great post.

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    1. Thank you so much for reading as well as sharing your kind words! 💎

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      1. You are most welcome 😊😊

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  8. Very touching story..every ending has beginning ! Great post 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much for sharing your kind words! 🌹

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  9. To echo the other comments, so well written, love the ending!

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    1. Aww thank you so much! So glad to have you here 😍

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  10. I loved the last message he wrote for her …

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    1. Thanks for admiring it and sharing your words!

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  11. We don’t want to lose the trust that love gives freely

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    1. Yes! thanks for sharing your kind words!

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    1. Thank you very much! 🌹

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  12. Haha this was fantastic! Excellent job! I loved the closure at the end.

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    1. Thanks a bunch. Glad you liked it. Always pleasure to have you here! 🌹

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  13. Very emotional …but amazing

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    1. Thanks a lot. Glad to have you here!

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  14. Thats an emotional and touching piece…

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    1. Glad that you liked it. Thanks a lot for sharing your words!

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      1. Always a pleasure ☺

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  15. Beautifully written 🙂

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    1. Thanks “you” so much for sharing your kind words!

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  16. This is a great story, Purva. Very moving. I like the poetry within as well. Excellent!

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    1. Thanks a ton for sharing your beautiful words! Always glad to have you here! 🌹

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  17. m y heart skipped beats on this one

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    1. Haha, thank you so much! You are too kind and humble. And always lovely to see you here. Lots of love 💕💎to you 💓💓💓

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  18. Lots of love to you. You are the kind one. Have a lovely weekend xx

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    1. U too! Have a great weekend! 🌹

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  19. Hi! Happy to have found your blog! I love the layout, the style the content…everything! I’ve read some of your posts and I can’t wait to read more! Looking forward to following you 🙂

    Lisa | http://www.fromdreamtoplan.net/

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    1. Hey! Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. Hope we will enjoy exchange visits more often! 🌹

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      1. My pleasure! 🙂

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  20. Oh I just love this! ❤ Excellent writing!

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    1. Thank you so very much for reading as well as sharing your words!

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      1. From the bottom of my heart you are so welcome! ❤

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  21. The last message is simply awesome and heart touching. Great work indeed. 🙂

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    1. Thank you so very much for your beautiful words. Glad you liked it. 💎

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  22. nice….magic created…. love always special

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    1. Love is very special feeling and special too. Thanks for sharing your lovely words! 🌹

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    1. Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it🌹

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